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TEENS: Do these characters in my novel seem realistic?

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TEENS: Do these characters in my novel seem realistic?

I’m asking here because they are our age, and I need some of your opinions. :)
Cranbert Nelson

Cranbert Nelson is a 15 year old boy, freshman in high school. He likes to read comics, practice math, and teach his Bearded Dragon lizard, Aprilshakira, how to do tricks – in his free time. Cranbert made up his own language – called Ziglo – because he has always had a constant problem with ‘thinking out loud’ and constantly got punished for it. So, since he realized that he couldn’t bite the bad habit, he should talk in an unknown language, which he had to make up so he could keep thinking out loud. He writes iCarly fan fictions in his spare time. He has a huge obsession with Abigail Breslin, he watched all of her movies at least three times and has a posters of her all over his room. He sometimes like to call himself Mr. Abigail Breslin.. when nobody is watching, of course. He is intelligent, awkward and clumsy. If he doesn’t get at least an A- on a test his parents freak out, because his oldest brother Conner got bad grades his whole life, dropped out of community college and is now living with his stripper girlfriend in a trailer somewhere in Nevada. He is friends with all of his teachers and has political jokes with his history teacher Ms. Bringehimer about President Hoover. Cranbert isn’t afraid to stick up to bullies. In 7th grade he had a public break down where he spilled milk over his head out of frustration because he was sick of everyone judging him.

Reese Nelson
Reese is extremely stupid and gets terrible grades in school. He is lazy and doesn’t even bother trying because he finds no point. He once video taped 2 Japanese Fighting Fish in a tank together (he placed them there) to watch them kill each other, but the video got removed from YouTube and Reese was fined for animal abuse. He likes to play baseball (even though he’s bad at it,) video games and drums. He is in a band called Crimson Cascade, which he plays the drums in and sings. He barely gets any attention at home because the focus is always on Cranbert. He is jealous of his brothers’ intelligence and the attention he gets from his parents. He also has something out for him because he’s the youngest. He is greedy and money hungry. He hopes one day to win the lottery or put a patten on an automatic bicycle and make millions of dollars. In the meantime he plans on getting a job at a fast food chain and work his way up to manager. He doesn’t want to go to college because he saw his older brothers Conner go and drop out because of stress. He is the one to go to when you need a forged signature or a fake report card. He calls himself “The Candy Man” because if you want something illegal done (IE a forged signature) you have to pay him with candy, brand name only. He works out of the janitors closet – room 214 and is extremely sneaky. He would have people pay him money, but he thinks that’s easier to trace. He has a tendency of hooking up with a lot of girls and then dumping them. His longest relationship has lasted two days, and that’s only because they got to home base.

Megan Hershey
Megan hates chocolate and her last name. She is very health conscious and neat and organized. She has extreme OCD. To relax she listens to calming music and meditates. She is friendly, outgoing and sociable. Her family is wealthy and have high expectations for her, although she would like to branch out and not be the perfect angel her family expects her to be. She must take a shower every day or else she feels gross. She is very computer savvy. She loves animals and is very caring and a humanitarian. Her favorite subject in school is History. She is ambitious and knows where she wants to go in life, as she wants to become a dance teacher at a prestigious dance school. She is good at almost all subjects in school, except for art because she always gets messy in that class. She has been playing the saxophone for three years, and dancing ballet for five years. She is very chatty and generous. She is optimistic, confident and vengeful when it hits her. She cares about what people think of her and strives from popularity. She is responsible, honest yet sensitive. Megan is fun-loving but a bit bossy as well. However she is thoughtful and mischievous. She is a great liar but chooses not too. She is a very religious, dedicated Christian – even though sometimes she doesn’t want to be. She has auburn hair, has a few freckles scattered along the bridge of her nose, pale skin and gray eyes. She thrives off attention and is very brave. She is very strong and isn’t afraid to stick up for herself or ones she loves. However she cares immensely about her reputation and doesn’t like to be seen with people who are unpopular. She learned the hard way from when she stuck up for Cranbert Nelson in the fifth grade and got made fun of for it. She is also very prim and proper. She is fortunate, innocent and gets j
Sorry, it cut off..

– jealous easily. She is also very clumsy and loves to read books (especially classics) even though she mostly keeps that a secret.

Please leave a comment on each character. Thank you! Sorry the question was so long, haha. :)
– OCD
I actually typed up a WAY longer outline for each character, but it wouldn’t fit here.
No, Cranbert’s the youngest lol.
Okay guys, stop being so nasty. I told you the characters have a lot more sides which I COULDN’T fit into this question. Maybe I’ll repost this with all the traits?
Actually I spent three days typing up these character outlines. I SAID: I COULDN’T POST THE WHOLE THING SINCE IT’S SIX PAGES LONG!

So please.. just tell me what you think of the characters (IN GENERAL.) And I’ve been writing for six years, FYI. I know what I’m doing..
I can accept critism fine. All I’m saying is you guys are being really nasty. You’re acting like I’m stupid, which I’m not. You can tell me what’s wrong WITHOUT insulting me and saying I don’t know how to write.

Answer by The fool~! :)
EHHHH!!! Your asking me to ANSWER it now? But I read it…Okay FINE! :)

Cranbert–woah lotsa detail, I can tell you’ve thought this through
That one guy– Not very memorable…but I know a few guys like him lol
Megan– Very very saccharine :P So much so that it might piss me off lol,

Good story I can tell you’ve really put effort and thought into it :)

Answer by eyyojanelle
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Answer by Dido
Megan and Cranbert seem fine, Reese seems to be rather single sided stereotypical bad boy, he has to have some redeeming quality.

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